Wendy's Writing Project Blog

A Tribute May 6, 2012

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I am from milk breaks and a wooden troll bridge with Mrs. Smith.
I am from notes to a lifelong friend and a cardboard post office with Mrs. Dick.
I am from Mrs. Guay, Miss Maines and Mr. Yeoman; and days of King of the Hill.
I am from recorders, polkas, and Mr. Faucett.

I am from just two accidents and Mr. Sherry, a sewing machine still in use and Mrs. Schwartz, four shirts of the same style/different material and Mrs. Quick, Sean’s extra credit worm brownies and Mr. Henderson.

I am from Mr. Shoaf (& Mrs. Shoaf), lessons too long to list, forever present in my life.

I am from a First Constitutional Convention simulation that has lasted 28 years (and counting) and Mr. Young.
I am from Ms. Geyman. The indirect life lessons on compassion and respect far outlasted the French.

I am from Judy Myers-Walls and Elaine Dolch, whose wisdom and guidance laid a foundation to work with the youngest of learners, especially my own.
I am from Bonnie Armbruster, Gail Hawisher and Sarah McCarthey who have strengthened my skills and enthusiasm for building lifelong readers, writers and thinkers.

In recognition of Teacher Appreciation Week, I thank and honor MY teachers.

 

An Experiment July 7, 2011

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Each time I sit down to write I’m conducting an experiment. This post is no different. I’m trying to embed some images via slide.com. My guess is that it won’t work on this free version of WordPress. If you end up with only a link, you’ll know why…

I captured the following images on our 2011 Writing Marathon. They continue to be a source of inspiration to draw upon. I’m especially looking forward to the bloom on the Titan Arum .

So… it embeds, but now it won’t center. The html code says it is aligned to the center, but it obviously isn’t. Why can’t things just be easy?

 

Assessing Writers the Carl Way July 6, 2011

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Becca has been one of the many great inspirations from my uiwp experience this year. I glean something from her every time I have a conversation with her. I asked her to make my last book pick for me, and knew she would lead me in the right direction. She put me on the path to Carl Anderson’s Assessing Writers.

Part of the reason this book appealed to me is that I continue to struggle with a manageable way to assess my students in writing. I am comfortable with the actual conferences that I have with my students. I can always find strengths in their pieces, and have developed a knack for honing in on an appropriate teaching point. The management piece is where I fall short. I want to feel that I have a system that meets the needs of all of my students– that I’m taking time to assess regularly, using the notes I take when I confer, and check back in with students on their writing goals in a timely manner. I feel guilty that I don’t collect writing folders often enough. Anderson reminds us that “good teachers assess student writers– not the end product” that we’ve collected to mull over during plan time or at home after the dinner dishes are done.

Anderson’s book is not only full of his wisdom. He uses valuable charts, checklists, activities for professional development or book groups, student examples, and viniettes. This format allows plenty of choice as he guides educators to be better writing teachers.

Anderson identifies three qualities of a lifelong writer to be:
one who initiates writing,
one who writes well,
and one who has a writing process that is effective.

I implement a literacy structure in my classroom called The Daily 5/Daily CAFE. One component is to use a menu of reading goals in student learning of comprehension, accuracy, fluency, and expanded vocabulary. It has really helped my students to take ownership of their learning in reading. As I continue to read, I am going to be on the lookout for ways to develop a menu for writing around the three qualities of a good writer. This could encompass the vision I have for my writers that goes beyond what I evaluate students on for their progress reports.

Anderson mentions that Donald Graves would claim initiation to be most important of the three. Initiating writing shows an understanding that writing has power and purpose. Writers who initiate communicate ideas to others, write different genres, and understands that writing is meaningful. Anderson states that writers who initiate writing, write. They write for various purposes (to celebrate, testify, and other reasons.) They have a repertoire of genres (and the purpose of writing each). They write for real audiences. Anderson encourages teachers to observe their students. How do they use their time doing workshop? Do they plan? Do they have good writing habits= drafting, revising, editing? Do they share with others or the class? Do they make time for writing outside of workshop time? He offers an idea of having students use a table of contents in their writer’s notebook detailing date, title, genre, and who they have shared. This might help with accountability as well as one way to monitor their initiatives.

A writer who writes well is able to communicate effectively with an audience. Anderson mentions the importance to familiarize yourself with the different lists of qualities or traits that educators have created, quoting Murray and Culham (6 + 1 Traits). He defines writing well as communicating meaning, using genre knowledge, structuring writing, writing with detail, giving voice, and using conventions.

On writing process– Anderson notes the importance of having a process that works for an individual. How do we assess this? If a writer produces decent pieces time-and-time-again, he believes he or she has an effective writing process.

Carl Anderson offers information on each quality, examines linking assessment and instruction, and guides educators towards effective writing conferences. His book a valuable resource for anyone wishing to be a better writing teacher. I look forward to using the ideas it has given me this fall.

 

Writing Marathon 2.0 July 1, 2011

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I had the pleasure of writing with Dave, Steve, and Warren on this year’s UIWP Writing Marathon. On our return, we took the road less traveled. It led us to the doors above. I hate to disappoint you, boys. These are not the observatory outhouses that we dreamed them to be– a place to watch the stars as you take care of your business. The place that led us from stargazing in the Black Hills to proclaiming secrets about a lack of interests and guilt that comes with speaking freely.

If you really want to spoil your imagination and learn more about them, there is plenty of information on their site, where aesthetics is confirmed to lack importance.

 

On Today’s Agenda: The March of the King of Laois June 29, 2011

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My bagpipe instructor had a stroke last week. At 94, he drove himself to the hospital and collapsed. He has moved into a room at a nursing home facility and is doing amazingly well. His speech has greatly improved. With therapy, he may be able to move back into his apartment.

Tonight, our small group of pipers will have their first concert without him. The pipes became too difficult for him to play. Even before the stroke, he found he was getting too winded. I’m pretty sure it was just a leaky bag, but who am I to argue with a 94-year-old.

I am performing a solo. Solos allow other pipers to catch their breath. We all take turns between sets. After a short two years, I’m far from ready, but it seems only fair that I try. Mr. Lynch feels it is an important step toward improving– playing in front of others. When I practice, I’m always playing for others– like it or not! The tune I’ve chosen is called The March of the King of Laois. At our last practice, Mr. Lynch insisted that I sing the tune in order to improve my phrasing. He kept telling me to listen, his hands flying through the air as he phrased the tune for me. He was attempting to get me to hear something I couldn’t. I thought my phrasing was going well. I could feel the ebb and flow. I was disappointed that he couldn’t. When you see me with my headphones on today, you know what I’ll be listening to… over and over again.

 

Videos 2.0 June 28, 2011

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My video project is done and over, but Dan is making me think about what I would do if I were to continue to edit. It is time to move on. I could do more projects. I wish I would interview my grandma on her literacy history, my son on his processes, my 94-year-old bagpipe instructor on his process of learning to play and relate it to learning to read, my dinner party with Tom Newkirk and Lucy Calkins… so much to do!

 

A foreward June 28, 2011

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At last summer’s institute I innocently dropped the name: Lucy Calkins. For those unaware, Calkins is highly regarded by elementary teachers around the world and is best known for her work at Columbia’s Teachers College Reading and Writing Project. To others, she is fingernails on a chalkboard. She is the author of the (what I know now to be controversial) Units of Study.

I wasn’t prepared for the reaction I got. The squirms, shifts in seats, eye contact avoidance, and maybe even an intentional “ahem” surprised me. I’ve heard complaints from others talking out against how hard it is to implement her ideas.

I have since learned of other reasons why Calkins rubs people the wrong way. Some who have met her proclaim her to be pompous. Others in her field are put off that she has marketed her program. There are those who believe she should be followed word-by-word, promoting scripted curriculum. Some feel that her disregard of the importance of fiction in our earliest writers is a disservice.

For me, Calkins’ Units of Study isn’t a curriculum, it is a structure. This structure has many strengths. Her books are chalked full of examples and provides modeling, especially for new teachers or those wanting (or needing) to improve their writing instruction. She offers up units/genres to delve into. Any good writing teacher would be able to use the structure with other genre inquiry, including fiction. As commented in a previous post, it is impossible to teach it all. Educators have to remain diligent when choosing what to teach.

As I finish Newkirk’s Misreading Masculinity, I’m left wishing I could have a dinner party with Tom, Lucy, and Anne sitting around the table. I may be naive, but I think we’d have a good time; and feel they would have more in common than differences.

 

Society’s Obligation: A Collaborative Writing Exercise June 28, 2011

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by Steve and Wendy

Society’s obligation to people like Yolanda is to help as much as possible. Yolanda is working hard to make herself a responsible citizen. For a democratic society to work, that society must help her to become that responsible citizen. Society benefits from helping people who try.

Our society is failing Yolanda. There were 12+ resources or agencies involved in her efforts to better her situation and care for her family. Most were failing her. If society would streamline the process, people like Yolanda could move forward.

A quick reflection of the process that led to the paragraphs above…
I agree with what was posted. Steve and I collaborate well. It helped that we had the same viewpoint. Steve was able to help me funnel the concrete details into a broader view. He is such a writer!

 

UIWP: A Coaches Perspective June 20, 2011

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My 13-year-old asked me why I would want to do the writing project again, pointing out how “wigged out” I was. He was right. I was stressed to the limit last summer, but I didn’t think twice when asked to return to this year’s summer institute as a member of the leadership team. I may have questioned the wisdom of those suggesting it’d be a good idea, but I wasn’t going to pass up the opportunity. I jumped at the chance of benefiting from another summer of good reading and writing habits, growing more comfortable with technology, and reaping the benefits of superb demonstrations. We have, yet again, been rewarded with an exceptional group. I look forward to their sighs, groans, cheers, and tears as we head further into the project.

 

Dang You, Daddy June 19, 2011

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It may seem cruel to pull out a scathing note I wrote my dad on Father’s Day. Instead of bringing up bitter feelings, this 37some-year-old document has brought our family a few laughs over the years. If my story is correct, my sister and I may have been looking forward to some chocolate turtles for a snack that day, only to find out that Dad beat us to them.

I’ve looked at this earliest saved composition of mine through different eyes over the years. This includes insight that I’d struggle with weight issues throughout my life, as well as how I’d have a hard time knowing when to shut up. (Note that I crossed out the ending in order to add a few more thoughts, then ran out of room.) I look through the letter with a teacher lense these days, and am quite enamored with the complexity. It starts on the opposite side…

I wonder if I was intentional with my ‘Dear Daddy’ and plea of how his poor little girl must have been on the brink of starvation. I wonder if I pictured him opening the letter… and WHAM, being shocked by the accusations. My voice depicts that I must have an anticipated that he would deny being a hoglet. Oh, the vengeance of eating the donuts and leaving him with nothing but the crumbs and wax paper! I am intrigued by my use of bold text. I really doubt that is something teachers taught their first graders back then. I noticed that my attention to spelling must have been overruled by my emotions at times– noticing and correcting some mistakes. I wonder if I had a b/d confusion, choosing to consistently write a capital ‘D’ at the beginning of words. It seems that I was fairly secure with my use of punctuation. The isolated “please?” at the top of the page was either an initial attempt, or (by the lack of space at the end) an afterthought to bring him back to see me as an innocent victim– batting my eyelashes for a trip to the store for more turtles.

Whichever lense I choose to use to look at this in the future, I am grateful that my Mom saved it. Have a wonderful day, Daddy. Send Mom go to the store to get you a box of chocolate turtles. You can hog them all to yourself!

 

 
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